Tell about something interesting that you learned about in chapel or one of your other classes.
Tell about something interesting that you learned about in chapel or one of your other classes.
When I took korean history class l leaned about jo sun dynasty’s kings
There are many kings in that age. I was so impressed about king jung jo.
He was the one of the examplary king.
He tightened politics, uprightened royal authority also appointed many talented people regardless of their class. I admire his strong will and infrangible moral strength.
Despite of resistances, he didn't back down. Sometimes I was swept away by circumstances so I want to learn his personal qualities. To be like the king Jung Jo, I'll do my best
I would like to commit in your writing.
답글삭제1. Pleas check punctuation. you often omitted ',' and '.' in this writing.
2. I was so impressed about king jung jo
> Jungjo is proper name. you need to check capital letters.
3. He was the one of the examplary king
> check plural form.